martes, 22 de diciembre de 2015

Write a thesis statement and the outline for an essay

i)                    Even after all the advances in marketing and technology, it hasn’t been enough to improve actual football from the old one.
ii)                  Actual Football is more expensive
Players get payed millions.
Clubs pay millions for players
Tickets for Matches can cost up to a hundred
iii)                Sponsors and companies pay for being allover stadiums and in club’s jerseys
Clubs make their own marketing campaigns to sell products more than even make their teams better
Competitions also give money to clubs
Clubs now go to look for foreign players, which gives less opportunities to those on the places where the clubs belong
iv)                Actual Football is not the same spectacle anymore
Players get into fight with each other
They dive to get the referees mistaken
Small kids follow the example of professionals
There is not as much respect as there used to be before

v)                  Because of how expensive is it, not accessible for all and how marketing has transformed the way to watch football, old football remains better in many ways than actual football.

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